in the end I wrote this.
Pairing: DenNor/NorIce (slide SuFin)
in Norway's POV (Sorry, if it is very OOC ;3; )
Language: English (Sorry for mistakes, not my first language)
Midnight Problems
- OH, NO! – I cried it loud.
It was too loud. First, Sweden entered my room, then Finland. I knew. They wanted to know what happened. No it was nothing. They should leave me now! I tried to hide my desk from them standing in front of it. I made my entire moves natural. Finland asked something like “What happened?”, but it was not clear, because Denmark was coming. He was noisy as always.
- Oh, MY GOD, WHAT HAPPENED? WHAT IS WRONG? ARE YOU OKAY?
He was irritating. I couldn’t do anything else, but punch him in stomach. He fell to the floor and didn’t move. And at least, Iceland appeared too. He looked shyly at me. Three of them were watching at me for the answer.
I started waving with my hand to show them I am fine, nothing is wrong, but they misunderstood. Sweden and Finland looked at each other. Yes, I saw, they've done. And they waved back to me. Oh my god. I just realized, what I did. It was very embarrassed.
- There is the door. – and I showed both of them the way to leave MY room. I need a night alone with my stuffs, can I have?
I turned back to my desk, when I realized, Iceland is THERE and reading MY diary!
- Oh, this is your problem. – He said.
I run there and pushed him away from it. What did he read? I looked at it. The most of the page was full of ink. My pen is broken, and all ink went to the paper and the desk. Yes, it was my problem but I overreacted!
Iceland opened his pocket. I started wondering why he is wearing his jacked in the late night. But he was wearing his pyjamas under it. Maybe he felt cold to come without it? Oh, my little brother, are you sick again?
Iceland take a ball pen out of his pocket and handed it to me.
- You can continue it if you want. And I didn’t read anything.
He turned around and left my room. No, he stopped in the door and looked back.
- Sleep well. – He said.
I wanted to him and gave him a kiss on his cheek. Near to his mouth. I missed his mouth.
- Brother?
He left me as fast as he can. I was alone. I turned back to my room. Iceland was really nice to give this to me, I can continue my diary. But those pages will be lost. But no problem, I wrote all of them TODAY, I can rewrite them all. With this new pen. Oh, I will add this to my diary. My little brother called me Brother again.
I stopped and looked down to the floor. Denmark was still there; he placed his hand under his head and looked like he is enjoying something. He looked up at me.
I grabbed my longer T-shirt’s edge pushing it down, when I realized; I was not wearing any underwear!
It was too loud. First, Sweden entered my room, then Finland. I knew. They wanted to know what happened. No it was nothing. They should leave me now! I tried to hide my desk from them standing in front of it. I made my entire moves natural. Finland asked something like “What happened?”, but it was not clear, because Denmark was coming. He was noisy as always.
- Oh, MY GOD, WHAT HAPPENED? WHAT IS WRONG? ARE YOU OKAY?
He was irritating. I couldn’t do anything else, but punch him in stomach. He fell to the floor and didn’t move. And at least, Iceland appeared too. He looked shyly at me. Three of them were watching at me for the answer.
I started waving with my hand to show them I am fine, nothing is wrong, but they misunderstood. Sweden and Finland looked at each other. Yes, I saw, they've done. And they waved back to me. Oh my god. I just realized, what I did. It was very embarrassed.
- There is the door. – and I showed both of them the way to leave MY room. I need a night alone with my stuffs, can I have?
I turned back to my desk, when I realized, Iceland is THERE and reading MY diary!
- Oh, this is your problem. – He said.
I run there and pushed him away from it. What did he read? I looked at it. The most of the page was full of ink. My pen is broken, and all ink went to the paper and the desk. Yes, it was my problem but I overreacted!
Iceland opened his pocket. I started wondering why he is wearing his jacked in the late night. But he was wearing his pyjamas under it. Maybe he felt cold to come without it? Oh, my little brother, are you sick again?
Iceland take a ball pen out of his pocket and handed it to me.
- You can continue it if you want. And I didn’t read anything.
He turned around and left my room. No, he stopped in the door and looked back.
- Sleep well. – He said.
I wanted to him and gave him a kiss on his cheek. Near to his mouth. I missed his mouth.
- Brother?
He left me as fast as he can. I was alone. I turned back to my room. Iceland was really nice to give this to me, I can continue my diary. But those pages will be lost. But no problem, I wrote all of them TODAY, I can rewrite them all. With this new pen. Oh, I will add this to my diary. My little brother called me Brother again.
I stopped and looked down to the floor. Denmark was still there; he placed his hand under his head and looked like he is enjoying something. He looked up at me.
I grabbed my longer T-shirt’s edge pushing it down, when I realized; I was not wearing any underwear!
And an art :Đ
Szia! jujj, első angol ficem! :D És, ha jól értettem, akkor tintás lett a napló, ugye? :P Vagy valami ilyesmi. Mindegy, szerintem jól értettem, és naggggyon tetszett! :) Főleg a vége. Nem volt rajta alsóruha. XD
ReplyDeleteNem értek az angol stílushoz, mivel nem anyanyelvem, de te stílusosan írtál. vagyis könnyen érthető volt, ezért nagy ölelés, élmény volt. Én speciel nem figyeltem annyira a hibákat, mivel nem magyar volt, de talán csak annyi: az angolok máshogy írják a párbeszédet.
ha magyar helyesírás szerint írjuk, akkor volt a párbeszédben hiba, sajnos.:( Erre figyelj! ;)
Na, csak ennyit mondok.:) Ja, meg szép a rajz. Lol. :D
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